The commatoform disorder

Punctuation, the comma, the dash, and other such characters, are to make the written matter clear. There is some logic to it, yet language is not a system, and there are no rules that would universally, objectively, and always apply. We need own common sense, or our body of text may become to exhibit a “commatoform” ailment, “somatoform” to mean something of a bodily character, ■→soma and ■→form together.

Common sense may work fine, but Polish language has been granted a canon for punctuation by a state regulator, the ■→Polish Language Council; therefore, decent respect to the opinions of mankind requires that a translator of Benjamin Franklin’s Autobiography declares the causes, and lets facts be submitted to a candid world, on her punctuation in Polish.

In styles less elevated than that of the ■→Declaration of Independence, distortions in the Polish comma as in the specialist and general public alike, are Internet-tagged „przecinkoza”, a would-be “commatosis” in English. The matter is not the translator’s whim.

■→This text is also available in Polish.

The new canon does, more or less, work with US civics, or texts as Thomas Paine’s Common Sense. The two types of written matter have this thing of style in common: they drive a point. One is legislation, the other is a political pamphlet.

However, “one does not dress for private company as for a publick ball”; Benjamin Franklin begins his memoir with an address to his son, and translation cannot style the language as for a constitutional article, or a tract for political rationale.

The canon imposes a list of words generally to use with the comma; the line is the words introduce subordinate clauses, but the practice is that discernment between defining and non-defining clauses is lost and the Polish comma becomes lexemic, that is, dependent on word shape, which I show below.

■→PWN, Words to have the comma before them

Between “such matter” and “this matter” — all languages do tell. Let us compare the new Polish canon for the US Constitution:
Sporządzą oni listę wszystkich osób, na które głosowano
To back translate,
They shall make a list of all the persons, who were voted for

The original yet is,
They shall make a list of all the persons voted for
Sporządzą oni listę wszystkich osób na które głosowano
However, all Polish spellcheckers are going to mark the word który (która, które) without the comma as a punctuation error.

According to the new canon,
all the persons voted for
as well as
all the persons, who were voted for
would translate the same, into
wszystkie osoby, na które głosowano, with the comma.
The defining and non-defining logical capacity in the language is lost.

The Polish would look deficient right at the beginning of Benjamin Franklin’s memoir:
“That felicity, when I reflected on it, has induced me sometimes to say, that were it offered to my choice, I should have no objection to a repetition of the same life from its beginning, only asking the advantages authors have in a second edition to correct some faults of the first.”

To translate as jak przy drugiej edycji książki, która daje poprawić, the back translation would render as the second edition; hence,
“Poczucie osobistego szczęścia, jak je brałem na rozum, sprawiło czasem że powiedziałem, jak by mi dano wybór, nie wahałbym się i miał takiego samego życia powtórkę, od początku, prosząc jedynie o tą autorską korzyść jak przy drugiej edycji książki co daje poprawić pewne wady pierwszej.

The items który and co are semantically and syntactically equivalent in contexts as here. The new canon for Polish yet would always require the comma before the word shape który.

The English items that and which, as the Polish co and który, belong with words to mark semantic scopes. Here, the item which refers to the entire clause before the comma.
“My belief of this induces me to hope, though I must not presume, that the same goodness will still be exercised toward me, in continuing that happiness, or enabling me to bear a fatal reverse, which I may experience as others have done…”

Let us compare Polish. Without the comma (as above) the Polish item co refers to some edition of a book only; with a comma (inflected into czego, without change in word sense), the reference embraces the entire preceding clause.
“Wiara ta skłania mnie do nadziei, choć mi z góry zakładać nie wolno, iż to samo dobro dalej będzie moim udziałem, bądź szczęście nadal przynosząc, bądź dając siłę przy jakiejś fatalnej zmianie, czego może przyjść mi zaznawać, jak już innym ludziom bywało…”

In both languages, it is important to view the reference semantically, and not only as some “syntactic surface”. We may compare questions as, Do you mind if I come in? The person answers, Sure, and the meaning is not to hold the guest at the door; he or she sure may enter.

Considering how close the sense for the word experience is to that for the word to suffer, in the passage from Benjamin Franklin’s text above, the semantic scope sure tells that fatal reverses happen.

Commas can mark semantic scopes; those occur in any natural language. Within a semantic scope, the comma yet can be for highlight or emphasis, as in the letter from Abel James:
MY DEAR AND HONORED FRIEND: I have often been desirous of writing to thee, but could not be reconciled to the thought, that…

The new Polish cannon forces lexemic compensation; for emphasis, we need to add a word:
“MÓJ DROGI I SZANOWNY PRZYJACIELU, często przychodziła mi przemożna chęć do Ciebie napisać, ale nie potrafiłem się pogodzić nawet z myślą, iż…

Polish items że or żeby are in the PWN list, too. In English, the corresponding structure often would have the item that or to, rendering as,
That felicity, when I reflected on it, has induced me sometimes, to say, that
The spellchecker shows the translation below as missing a comma.

That felicity, when I reflected on it, has induced me sometimes to say, that were it offered to my choice, I should have no objection to a repetition of the same life from its beginning…

Poczucie osobistego szczęścia, jak je brałem na rozum, sprawiło czasem że powiedziałem, jak by mi dano wybór, nie wahałbym się i miał takiego samego życia powtórkę, od początku…

Benjamin Franklin’s comma after the verb phrase to say continues to emphasize that the thing is in just saying so, because nobody gets to live twice. With a canon like the one for Polish, all phrases as to say that would require a comma, to say, that.

Natural languages are also spoken. Commas obviously are not to regulate the breath, and their sounding is mostly in word stress and intonation. In spoken Polish, words as że or żeby are markers clear enough, for sentence structure; phrases as powiedziałem (powiedziałam) że | I said that — just the same as in English, do not have the spoken mark for the comma, unless we want to emphasize or highlight speaking. Verbs for thought and feeling also fit with the pattern well.

To transcribe spoken language and add commas everywhere with the word że, as required by the new Polish canon, would mean adding highlight or emphasis the spoken original never had. There is no way reasonably to require speaker adaptation of content to lexemic written punctuation, or to hold spoken language generally for erroneous. Finally, the spoken comma everywhere might give the impression that words for speaking, thinking or feeling are separated from what is spoken, thought, or felt.

English punctuation is the same for spoken and written language. Both English and Polish will be “more of a verb in nature” when spoken, and may prefer noun phrases for formal written styles. A person might write,
Establishment of corporate supervisory capacity has been proposed
The same person might say,
They propose to establish a corporate supervisor
The new Polish written canon would have commas to separate all verbs, beside the lexemic punctuation already described. To take a note, we would be to write:
They propose, to establish a corporate supervisor

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Naturally, languages also differ in punctuation, and seeking to adapt one to another could not make a point. The Spanish put their exclamation mark “upside down”. Language logic yet will be the same for defining and non-defining abilities of human syntax, in English as well as Polish. On the other hand, embedded discourse may vary in notation, as in my translation below; a few places, the spellchecker would require more commas, but I do not see any reason to insert them.

Thus refreshed, I walked again up the street, which by this time had many clean-dressed people in it, who were all walking the same way. I joined them, and thereby was led into the great meeting house of the Quakers near the market. I sat down among them, and, after looking round awhile and hearing nothing said, being very drowsy thro labor and want of rest the preceding night, I fell fast asleep, and continued so till the meeting broke up, when one was kind enough to rouse me. This was, therefore, the first house I was in, or slept in, in Philadelphia.

Walking down again toward the river, and, looking in the faces of people, I met a young Quaker man, whose countenance I lik’d, and, accosting him, requested he would tell me where a stranger could get lodging. We were then near the sign of the Three Mariners. “Here,” says he, “is one place that entertains strangers, but it is not a reputable house; if thee wilt walk with me, I’ll show thee a better. He brought me to the Crooked Billet in Water-street. Here I got a dinner; and, while I was eating it, several sly questions were asked me, as it seemed to be suspected from my youth and appearance, that I might be some runaway.

Posilony, poszedłem znów w górę ulicy, a na tej zdążyło się pojawić wielu schludnie ubranych ludzi, wszyscy idąc w jedną stronę; dołączyłem do nich i tak oto przywiedziono mnie do wielkiego domu spotkań kwakrów, przy rynku. Usiadłem pomiędzy nimi, porozglądałem się przez chwilę, a że nikt nic nie mówił i byłem bardzo śpiący po wysiłku poprzedniej nocy, mocno zasnąłem i spałem tak aż do końca spotkania, kiedy to ktoś był na tyle uprzejmy, żeby mnie obudzić. Takoż był to pierwszy dom gdzie byłem czy spałem, w Filadelfii.

Idąc znów w stronę rzeki i przyglądając się ludzkim twarzom, napotkałem na młodego kwakra i jego wygląd mi się spodobał, stąd zagadałem do niego i zapytałem, gdzie przyjezdny mógłby znaleźć kwaterę. Byliśmy wtedy blisko szyldu Trzech Marynarzy. „Tutaj”, powiedział, „przyjmują obcych, ale miejsce to nie ma dobrej reputacji; o ile się pan zgodzi ze mną trochę przejść, pokażę panu lepsze”. Zaprowadził mnie do Garbatej Gospody na ulicy Wodnej. Dostałem tam obiad. Kiedy jadłem, zadano mi parę podchwytliwych pytań, podejrzewając najwyraźniej po moim młodym wieku i wyglądzie, że mogłem być zbiegiem.

Keimer made verses too, but very indifferently. He could not be said to write them, for his manner was to compose them in the types directly out of his head; so there being no copy, but one pair of cases, and the Elegy likely to require all the letter, no one could help him.

Keimer też układał wiersze, ale niedbale. Nie dało się powiedzieć że je pisał, bo jego sposobem było układać czcionki od razu, z głowy; ponieważ nie było kopii, a tylko jedna para dużych i małych liter, i dało się spodziewać, że Elegia będzie wymagać ich wszystkich, nie było jak mu pomóc.

The new canon for Polish is by far too prescriptive and I do not know any rationale for it. Should it have been shaped within some universalist pursuit, I have a brief comment here, ■→The role of feedback in language use, universalist theories. On the side of language practice, it would be enough to remove the actually lexemic requirement on the comma and all are error-free: texts for civics, political pamphlets, and memoirs.

Feel welcome to my translation of Benjamin Franklin’s Autobiography, page for page from the original manuscript as available from Huntington in separate sheets, and from ■→my Internet Archive account as a PDF book. I believe clarity and style of Polish as a natural language do not suffer, and there is no need to insert any more commas; see for yourselves, ladies and gentlemen.

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Note. I translate the singular gentleman as dżentelman, and gentlemen as dżentelmani, regular Polish plural, though the new canon would have dżentelmen for the singular, and dżentelmeni for the plural. Assimilation into dżentelmen might carry odd impressions of plurality.

The new canon advises the Polish item rather than (feminine for the English item this), which I consider a matter of vogue, phonological proximity naturally and successfully to resolve as tę rękę, tą książkę, the pattern I follow.

Junto is translated as Ramię w Ramię (shoulder to shoulder), as junto is a word of English, but it is not a word of Polish, where there only are the junta or hunta, words for a military regime.

The translation has one occurrence of the variant form podeszłem: a most frequent “error” in prescriptivist opinion, it shows in language use as for a group, team, or couple (we: podeszliśmy, you, plural: podeszliście; I, feminine: podeszłam; I, masculine: podszedłem, or the convergent podeszłem); Polish also allows the verb podejść for progression or approach in contexts psychological or generally open, new.

The masculine variant esz has been rejected as deriving from historically a feminine stem. The Polish masculine plural (podeszli) yet has the stem, as there are no feminine verbs in Polish; there happens gender-marked flexion.

It is actually only the masculine third-person singular, podszedł or poszedł, always to have sze in the stem; well, there is always the ■→theory of the third man, as there is no natural language principle for the grammatical third person to govern the first.

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Modern Polish has variants, as for the ability to see, patrzeć or patrzyć, where both shapes are considered correct, regardless of grammatical gender.